Story Update

[will_couvillier]

After the revision to address the problems pointed out by my group, the story did come out to 3500 words, or rather,3494 per the Word tool.  Also, it actually made it within the deadline.

Hoping for the best --

Now to work on a couple of sequels.  I think they are more for me, since I am particularily happy with the original tales.

Will.