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will_couvillier ([personal profile] will_couvillier) wrote2008-05-27 03:03 pm
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Tranquility

misty cool damp serene
fanning hair reclined breasts rise
sleeping mermaids dream 
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[identity profile] kaolinfire.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 10:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm far from expert or experienced in such things, but I think that is the best genre haiku I've seen.

[identity profile] will-couvillier.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks - good words for a little something I just threw together!
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[identity profile] kaolinfire.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Sometimes the magic hits _just so_ :)

[identity profile] will-couvillier.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I was playing a little renga with dragons at rhfay's LJ, and my break while thinking about it was this, and the pixie hunt.
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